OK, so I've been wanting to leave this comment for a while, but I haven't had the time to write it properly...so finally I can tell you how awesome and droolworthy this chapter was!
Yes...you had me with Ichigo's back hitting the wall. Wait, that was the first sentence. XD Yes, Renji, tell him all the dirty things you're going to do to him! *drooling* OK, now I'm laughing because of the sidekick argument, but a second later my nosebleed kicks in because of Renji's dirty mouth.
I want to hold you up against this wall and fuck you until you can't breathe. Yes, please, Renjiman!
Love, love, love how they're still both jockeying for control. So them and so delicious.
I wonder how long it'll take you to come just like this. Not long, just keep talking...
And how impatient Ichigo is? Mmmmmm...yeah, that's just how I picture him, too...and I love how Renji tries to play with that and keep him waiting, knowing that it'll just make Ichi hotter. :D
"I don't fucking care, rip it off." Heh, heh, Ichigo, you're so cute...especially when you're desperate to get off. XD Of course, it's kind of hot how dominant he can get when he is. It would be kind of nice to just suddenly have no clothes on when that's what you wanted. XD
Yay! That is one of the nice things about writing an AU - you can make your own rules. As always, I'm ever so happy about you promoting safe sex, though. :D
...lick every patch of skin he could think of. Mmmmm...sounds delicious! Yes, please!
Ichigo was going to prepare himself, and Renji would have to watch. Uh, my nosebleed is getting worse but I can't stop reading. *tries to hold head up and keep reading at the same time* Love how Ichigo is fascinated with those yummy tattoos, and...gah, how did Ichi get to be so sexy?
...that Ichigo was getting off on fucking himself on top of Renji, or that he was getting off on Renji being there, touching him. *makes incoherent noises*
...I'll make you come again...And again, until we're fucking all night and we really can't. This quote is made of yes. *wants*
"Think I can't take your big cock?"..."Oh, I know you can." %#$fhjoiujasdlk *nosebleed becomes much worse*
Just loved Renji being able to reach out to Ichigo's energy to feel/figure out what's going on with him, and the way they both lose control when the fucking really commences...and the amazingly delicious descriptions of what's going on...I can't comment further on those in a human language, but I think I did make some noises...
And, fuck, I loved that they were actually floating afterwards. I'm still laughing at the mental picture of Ichigo clutching on to Renji to keep from falling onto the floor. XD
This whole chapter is made of so much win that I can't even coherently tell you. "Wanna go again?" Yes, please!
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on 2010-01-31 06:47 pm (UTC)Yes...you had me with Ichigo's back hitting the wall. Wait, that was the first sentence. XD Yes, Renji, tell him all the dirty things you're going to do to him! *drooling* OK, now I'm laughing because of the sidekick argument, but a second later my nosebleed kicks in because of Renji's dirty mouth.
I want to hold you up against this wall and fuck you until you can't breathe. Yes, please, Renjiman!
Love, love, love how they're still both jockeying for control. So them and so delicious.
I wonder how long it'll take you to come just like this. Not long, just keep talking...
And how impatient Ichigo is? Mmmmmm...yeah, that's just how I picture him, too...and I love how Renji tries to play with that and keep him waiting, knowing that it'll just make Ichi hotter. :D
"I don't fucking care, rip it off." Heh, heh, Ichigo, you're so cute...especially when you're desperate to get off. XD Of course, it's kind of hot how dominant he can get when he is. It would be kind of nice to just suddenly have no clothes on when that's what you wanted. XD
Yay! That is one of the nice things about writing an AU - you can make your own rules. As always, I'm ever so happy about you promoting safe sex, though. :D
...lick every patch of skin he could think of. Mmmmm...sounds delicious! Yes, please!
Ichigo was going to prepare himself, and Renji would have to watch. Uh, my nosebleed is getting worse but I can't stop reading. *tries to hold head up and keep reading at the same time* Love how Ichigo is fascinated with those yummy tattoos, and...gah, how did Ichi get to be so sexy?
...that Ichigo was getting off on fucking himself on top of Renji, or that he was getting off on Renji being there, touching him. *makes incoherent noises*
...I'll make you come again...And again, until we're fucking all night and we really can't. This quote is made of yes. *wants*
"Think I can't take your big cock?"..."Oh, I know you can." %#$fhjoiujasdlk *nosebleed becomes much worse*
Just loved Renji being able to reach out to Ichigo's energy to feel/figure out what's going on with him, and the way they both lose control when the fucking really commences...and the amazingly delicious descriptions of what's going on...I can't comment further on those in a human language, but I think I did make some noises...
And, fuck, I loved that they were actually floating afterwards. I'm still laughing at the mental picture of Ichigo clutching on to Renji to keep from falling onto the floor. XD
This whole chapter is made of so much win that I can't even coherently tell you. "Wanna go again?" Yes, please!